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  • skycastles.

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    Very good job. -claps-
    You made me cry! D:
    But.... I really enjoyed reading this.
    Very good romance, and I love how you incorporated the lyrics, and song titles into the story.
    Overall, I loved it.

    Um, good luck, and thank you a bunch for joining my lame ass contest! x)
    March 30th, 2010 at 06:51am
  • matthuee.

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    This was really good :D It was sad D: Good job writing it.
    March 6th, 2010 at 05:09am
  • Mrs Synyster Gates

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    You fucking bitch...I'm crying now...this was simply amazing and beautifully written...I loved it.
    March 6th, 2010 at 02:01am
  • Asmodeus;

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    :( You made me sad! but I loved it! :) *claps* Good job!
    March 5th, 2010 at 03:52am
  • Dick Grayson

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    That’s is really good! It made me sad though :(

    Oh, and I don’t know if you meant to do this, but, in the third paragraph from the end in Franks POV, you started to write in 3rd person and then went back to 1st person. Just thought you’d like to know…
    March 5th, 2010 at 03:28am
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