Insidious. - Comments

I'm really not sure how I feel about this. I love it, because it's really raw and full of emotions. I don't like it because it ends so abruptly, and it's kind of confusing. But I don't think it could've been any other way, really. Really, really good job.

You're a really fantastic writer. Hats off to you :D

Masterpiece.

'Nuff Said.

this has got to be one of my favorite stories. it's brilliant. :)

Ah! I love this!! I'm really sad it's over but I think it ended well! It was brilliant!

this is beautifullllll!

I love this :]
The narration is beautiful
and it's so perfectly fucked up that it's just awesome...
The last chapter gave me chills... :]

Ohmaiigawsh.
I love this, hun!
Update!
This story is amazing :)

awee, i feel like harlow and i could be great friends.
she is such a sweatheart.

but honestly, i am so in love with this. poor zach, poor rachel, poor everyone.
how long do you think this is gonna be ?

i'm crying...

I love this!! it's really good!! What age are your characters?

dude seth is such a creeper, haha, but seriously though.

i'm really digging the narrative, you really give the characters personality.
you are really good at developing them also. i really like this.

omg omg omg poor rachel and poor zach and poor tommy for almost having to hear about it.
this story, like, it's become a part of me haha, and i feel like i'm part of all this.
i can't believe what a bitch zach was being when he slapped her, although he had a point.

but.. still. and i like tommy's character, although he's not really a main one,
he's in it enough to where i like him a lot and how he's kind of zach's rock in a sense.

FFFUUUUU-

i don't like dean. freakin' rapist.
\but this this wonderful. i like the relationship between angie and zacky, how they just kinda put everythign aside and she talked about it. and how zack knows he's not a good guy. i agree with cobain, he is an interesting character.

i like this.
zack is such an interesting character.

the bond between harlow and zack is a strange one,
strong, but strange. two broken people, searching for the same things.

very short but very well written.

i like this very much, again haha.
i feel like i can relate and feel the characters emotions.
right now i just want to hug zack, (:

i had a feeling that she died
poor zack is really shaken up & that horrible death...
post soon.
-thank you&come again.

This is intense. I love it. Your writing style is simple. It reminds me a little of Chuck Palahniuk. Idek. It's short and straight to the point almost. And everything seems totally fucked up--it's good. I want to say this is lovely, but that's not the right word. It's really good, but that doesn't do it justice. Just know that I adore this, then. :)

awe, poor rachel. poor zack. poor tommy for having to tell him.

this is great.

i feel like i'm looking into the lives of regular teenagers,
not reading a story. this is that lovely.