Lost Freedom Daydream - Comments

Great chapter! I love the emotion behind it and there was great detail. Lookign forward to the next update!

I really like the 1st chapter. It is a really good start to a story I know will be amazing.

Thanks for mentioning me in your authors notes.

@ January Rose Thank you so much for the comment! It's been awhile since I've even thought about this story but I may have to sit down and think about updating the story and maybe even continue to write it.

Please continue with this story!

There are a few spelling and punctuation errors, but other than that, the story is pretty good.

might want to clean up the simple grammatical stuff so your story doesn't get reported. Just a warning but other than that pretty cool except it is just a filler lol.

p.s. my story Fighter is on hold for the very moment. I have started a new story and fell in love with it. So it may take a while for me to update the story

ooooh <3
Damien is SUCH a dickhead!
Great work!

Damien is a really mean character and her parents screwed Kayden over. I like how the emotions were with Kayden when she found out she has to be a slave. I hope she doesn't lose hope yet.

pretty cool so far, but I think some of your characters are dicks!!

keep up the good work!!

More more!!!

keep up the good work!! I cant wait to read more!

Beautiful! Write more!

hmmm maybe damien dows but maybe somebosy else as their eye on her.
and thank you guys for the support
i think my next port will be on wednesday.

ohh i think damien has a crush on kayden (:

I love this story so far and can not wait for more

oh i looooove it!

thank ya loose yourself
i hope you like the next chapter.

this is very interesting
i cant wait for more

Your so very welcome! I love this new chapter it is amazing! and thank you for telling me you liked my story Fighter!!

umm well alot of thing inspired me to write.
my daydreams movies and music. and alot of personal thing.
but i mostly just wrote everything that never really happens in my life
and youll see why they did
oh i post every sunday and have up to chapter 9 written.
thanks for commeting.