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  • nealerfan18

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    aww i love the fic so far. Ryan and Sofia are so perfect for eachother. Bryson is so cute. i can't wait for more!
    please more :(
    June 25th, 2010 at 09:18am
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    I think it's nice that they had such a private ceremony but, I have to wonder if she ever plans on telling her family that she's married.
    I sort of want her to just ignore her family, her sister, in specific since I don't think any good will come of them seeing each other again with Ryan making it to the NHL I don't want the sister to be seeking them out for money or anything like that.
    But, hopefully things go well for them since Ryan's in the NHL and they've got a growing family.
    Can't wait to see what happens next.
    April 24th, 2010 at 04:00am
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    aww they finally made it to the nhl!! i cant wait till all the drama of being an nhl wife comes into play and she needs to learn how to cope with all the pucksluts throwing themselves at her husband especially with crazy pregancy hormones!!great update and keep up the great work! whens the next update coming out?
    April 22nd, 2010 at 04:19am
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    you're dialogue is snappy and atompsheric tension brilliant, although i believe you're time jumping a little far and you're losing a little of the family dynamic that needs to be developed. good chapter though, and i look forward to seeing how you do the family reunion
    April 22nd, 2010 at 03:55am
  • BrookieCookie490

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    i loved the update! I cant wait to see what happens when they see her family! more soon please!
    April 21st, 2010 at 05:22pm
  • life.in.technicolor

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    can't wait for her family to make their appearance! loved the new chapter!!!
    April 21st, 2010 at 04:18pm
  • mully17

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    They make the most adorable family!!! Can't wait for baby 2
    April 21st, 2010 at 04:05pm
  • sonya6w

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    Oh no. I can feel the drama coming up soon. I hope her family doesn't do anything stupid while they're visiting. And she's preggers again! Woot woot! This is a fail of a comment but its 7:50AM here, so I'm dead tired.
    Anyways...can't wait for more :)
    April 21st, 2010 at 01:40pm
  • sonya6w

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    WEDDING! With no Elvis...sad, but yay? Ryan is doing everything in his power to keep her happy and bring her confidence up. Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
    March 30th, 2010 at 07:56pm
  • pupofpower

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    Its cute, cheesy and unique at the same time! You've got great tension and atmosphere working and it flows nice and tightly. Just keep in mind the few small typos you made in the previous chapter to this and then you're going to do fantastically!! ^^

    Keep up the great work and i look forward to your next update!
    March 30th, 2010 at 10:36am
  • Taylor;

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    I was still rooting for Elvis wedding in Vegas.
    I love that Ryan reassures Sofia that he's completely dedicated to Bryson and her and tries to get rid of her insecurities.
    Ryan is so good with Bryson though, he's really stepped up to the plate when Sofia got pregnant and now that she's actually had Bryson especially if he's willing to wake up to his cries. The Miller men's pajama party sounds cute, they were just waiting for mommy to wake up.
    March 30th, 2010 at 07:17am
  • TSPensGirl89

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    Wow I am in love with this story!
    March 30th, 2010 at 04:43am
  • mully17

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    Ryan is like mr.mom what an amazing dad! And yay for a wedding can't wait!
    March 30th, 2010 at 04:31am
  • BrookieCookie490

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    I loved the update! I cant wait to see what happens in Vegas! More soon please!
    March 30th, 2010 at 03:56am
  • PensRock

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    Wow she's really sick. A temp that high is really serious. I hope she's OK.
    It's nice to see Ryan's devotion to her. She's a bit insecure it seems, but he treats her so well and he's amazing with the baby. And he stays at the hospital with her, how sweet is that?
    March 22nd, 2010 at 04:39am
  • sonya6w

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    Awh, poor Sofia. At least she has baby Bryson and Ryan to keep her company. They are such a cute family. I love how Ryan is talking about more babies already, I mean they just had Bryson :P Anyways, I can't wait for more! :)
    March 21st, 2010 at 05:35am
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    It's too bad that Sofia got an infection, I know she's worried about money right now too but, she should watch her stress don't want to get too worked up and start getting migraines especially when you'll be taking care of a newborn. I like that Ryan is doing his best to take care of Sofia and the baby though. Ryan asleep with Bryson on his chest, can you saw "aw" such a cute mental image.
    March 21st, 2010 at 02:08am
  • mully17

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    Awww sofia is like any first time mom being worried! Ryans so cute knowing she was up
    March 20th, 2010 at 07:50pm
  • PensRock

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    Aww The baby's here! I hope things go well for them. I love their little family and I love that she's keeping the ring. She should have a beautiful ring if that's what he wants her to have. :D I like happy Ryan Miller.
    March 19th, 2010 at 10:58pm
  • sonya6w

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    BABY!!!! Awwwhhh, Bryson is such a cute name! I absolutely love how Ryan treats Sofia! I can't wait for more!!
    March 18th, 2010 at 12:06am