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  • fifthghost

    fifthghost (655)

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    I'm assuming this title came from the CIWWAF song so I automatically love it. But this was really different! It's nice seeing even your much older stuff is individual and entertaining (because a bunch of my old fics are such generic porn it's so bad omg).
    April 22nd, 2017 at 02:14am
  • hungrytales

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    Ok, I just found this and although I'm probably years late, I still think you should make a chaptered fic out of this. It's really good and original. I think it would be interesting to see how his disease develops.
    July 27th, 2013 at 05:30pm
  • MakeItASweetGood-bye

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    omg this is so original and amazing and i wish it was a full chatered fic <3
    May 3rd, 2013 at 11:43pm
  • sunny.

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    omfgdfjgdsigsdhfgu
    one of my favorite jalex oneshots. like, evar.
    for cereal.
    i just loved everything about this.
    from the semi-seriousness of it to the nice little ending.
    i just
    i can't even.

    WONDERFUL
    September 14th, 2010 at 12:03am
  • CarynPikachau

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    me likes :)
    thats was awesome XD
    June 6th, 2010 at 08:57am
  • november rain;

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    Awhh. That was so cute. D:
    I think it was really well-written at the beginning, but towards the end was kind of rushed, maybe? I don't know how to explain it, but yeah.
    Best work or not, though, it was still really good. :D

    And, oh yeah, good luck! [x
    March 13th, 2010 at 03:30pm
  • Kelllin Quinn

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    Awwhokay
    I loved this
    definately not something I've read before
    but it was sooo amazingly written
    I was like
    "This is so good!" the whole time
    :] so yea
    you are a great writer! Keep it up.
    And good luck with the contest
    March 12th, 2010 at 12:04am
  • nicholas joseph;

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    It may not have been your best work,
    in your words of course,
    but I honestly enjoyed it,
    and thought it was fantastic!
    You did an amazing job,
    and it was really cute and sweet<3
    I loved it so much. ^.^
    <3
    March 11th, 2010 at 10:07pm
  • SignalFire

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    This one shot was AMAZING!!!

    You really captured the illness perfectly and that's not an easy thing. Well done!

    I loved how although this was about a mental illness it wasn't a heavy one-shot to read. You kept it light and I really enjoyed reading this!

    You ended it perfectly!
    I jpoe you do really well in this contest.
    March 11th, 2010 at 09:34pm