Kidnapper - Comments

This was brilliant [:

Your narration was amazing.

Wow, that was really powerful even though it was so short. I loved the repetition, it made it sound like the narrator was almost panicking, which made the story have even more depth. And it left me wondering, which was very good.

"The waves took her, took her into the ocean, and drowned her. "
I loved that part. It was a very powerful way to end the story. It was very good