I'm Falling to Pieces - Comments

Love this, you should definately continue it. please update soon :D

Loving it :D :D :D

love it! Update soon babe!

i love it!!! its awesome and amazing!!

I love it so far please update

I love the story
So good
I want to read more
Axel and bri are such a cute "couple"

awwwwww they r so cute!

thanks mercy! :D
I really tried (:

Hey there! I'm sooo sorry that I have not commented this story in awhile. But I really like it so far.
You have gotten much, much, much better at writing and your grammar and everything. At first I thought that maybe you were moving a bit too fast with your characters, but really- it's just perfect.
There was a confusing part. When she got home from the park? When it said it was Friday, and she had to find an outfit and called Ellie, that kind of confused me. But so far, it is just great. Love it!
-Mercy

thanks guys! I will :D

I love it so far (:
It's reallly good.
Update soon?

i love it! update soon plzzzzzzzzzz

thankyou! :D

i likey!!! keep going! i loooovvvee it.

LOL iloveyou
& I shall keep going.

intense. I lovelovelove it. [:
Keep going or I shall smite you!

thanks mercy! & don't worry in the next chapter there will be a bit of the makeover (:

Hey, hey, hey. A great chapter six. I do wish it was longer, you know have Ellie over and write a little bit of the makeover down. But overall, I think you are leading to something very big that's about to happen and I can't wait to find out. The party seems like it will be interesting. And, there is one thing. I thought you said one more day to the party, but then you make it seem like it is the day of the party. I just got confused- I could've read it wrong. So my bad if I did.
Very exciting - can't wait to see what happens!! (:
-Mercy

thankyou viv! (:

Keep going, I'm looving it. [: