July 12th, 2010 at 02:46am
I'm glad I checked out the story!
I really like Tori's character.
I could use maybe a bit more explanation how Tori met Keith? I'm curious really as to how they met.
(In the fourth chapter, you put, "That is all I need to get me threw the years after she's gone.", but I believe you mean through not threw. Just a small thing that caught my eye.)
I really like Tori's character.
I could use maybe a bit more explanation how Tori met Keith? I'm curious really as to how they met.
(In the fourth chapter, you put, "That is all I need to get me threw the years after she's gone.", but I believe you mean through not threw. Just a small thing that caught my eye.)