Letter to My Killer - Comments

i like this a lot! are you going to write more?

Wow that was good. Some grammatical errors, but it was still good nonetheless.

The P.S was hilarious. My brother's best friend was in jail and I sent him a letter like that. He wasn't too pleased.

this is great add more? dont drop the soap haha loved it xx

Hehe >.<

Ps. Don't drop the soap!

I love that line!

Forget what Boredom said
Your chapter was great
I liked the way you wrote it
and the the part ant the ending

P.S.never get down for using your creativity

I know you can do better than that, Dani.
Come on, I want to see some correct puntuation!
"Dear, Vincent Harris" is suppossed to be "Dear Vincent Harris," and there are more.
The title? Should be all caps for the beginning of each word. I know you can do WAY better than this.