December 21st, 2010 at 02:04am
Anywhere But Here - Comments
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Okay so no sex for Jolyssa but I'm thinking Grisa got a little somethin' somethin' going on thurrr ;) lmao ew okay so damn gurllllllll that was so suspenseful I almost shat my pants. Almost. Can't wait for more!!!!!!December 20th, 2010 at 04:14am
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Loved the update! I could just... feel the tension all throughout this chapter, and I honestly thought something serious was going to happen, but... nothing did. Until the end there, where I'm assuming the power went out. :o Aw, but the cute moment was when Joe kissed her, aw! :D lol. Overall, amazing update; so glad that you updated again. Can't wait for the next chapter! :DDecember 15th, 2010 at 12:02am
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YOU'RE A TEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE.... welll.... really Joe is but.... TEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Blackout.... SEX kbyeDecember 14th, 2010 at 12:17am -
Loved the update! Hm... I like how Alyssa talked to her friend from home. Shows that people miss her there. A little tentative there with the step mom.... but, the part with Joe then made up for it. :) Overall, great update! Can't wait for the next chapter! :DOctober 22nd, 2010 at 02:38am
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"...tapping her hand gently as he walked past her towards the garage."
I like that part :) :)
I liked the whole chapter. It was nice seeing someone from home.October 19th, 2010 at 12:54am -
I am seriously loving this story !
Just read all 8 chapters and they were intesne. I love the whole plotline. It's always a bit weird reading a story were the boys aren't famous, but I do like it. I think her Dad is sweet. I love that he's a writer :) I think Frankie's cute and I love Denise. Nick seems douchey and we haven't met Kevin Sr. or Kevin Jr. yet, but I can't wait.
Seriously love this story and your writting.
Subscribed.August 18th, 2010 at 08:02am -
Wow that would scare the crap out of me if that ever happened!
Please update soon :)August 1st, 2010 at 10:11pm -
Loved the update! I'm glad that you finally posted; I've missed reading this story. :) The ending of the chapter freaked me out a little bit... so the person's been in her room? Creepy. Aw, and too bad her and Joe didn't kiss. lol. Overall, great update! Can't wait for the next chapter!! :DAugust 1st, 2010 at 04:39am
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Holy shiznuts. Why didn't they kiss? -.-
I hope you get over writers block son because I would love some more of this :)July 31st, 2010 at 02:44pm -
Omg first time reader, love this story so much suspence and powerful emotions,love it update soon. :)July 31st, 2010 at 09:14am
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Loved the update! Yes, so I was kind of right. The girl Lily dealt with something similar to what Alyssa's going through now. It's such a shame that she died. :( I'm not sure who to guess to be her murderer, other than the same guy that's following Alyssa. :/ I don't think Alyssa's crazy, either, there probably is someone following her. Anyways, overall, loved the update! You keep on making this story intenser with each new chapter; which makes it interesting to read. Can't wait for the next chapter! :DJune 14th, 2010 at 03:23am
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Wow I can't believe Joe told her that.
Update soon please :))June 13th, 2010 at 06:48pm -
So I was right she died but a murder is WAY more tragic than cancer :p NAWWWWWWWWWWWW MY POOR JOSEPH. I wanted to jump in and hug him. Very nice darling :)June 13th, 2010 at 04:17pm
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Wow so many questions run through my mind. One, who is that girl?!
I hope we find out soon and why Joe hasn't brought home any 'girlfriends' since her(i'm assuming the girl Frankie mentioned was the girl in the picture)
Update soon please! :)May 24th, 2010 at 03:49am -
Loved the update! I agree with the two people above me, saying that the girl in the photo was Joe's girlfriend. I say, that since Alyssa's father knows something, that he was there when the girl died, or knows how she died. But that's just what I'm thinking. Or even maybe the guy that's been following her has something to do with it or something similar happened with that girl compared to what Alyssa's dealing with now...? I'm rambling, lol, sorry. Anyway, like I said, loved the update and can't wait for more! Please update as soon as you can! :DMay 24th, 2010 at 01:27am
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Im thinking the same thing promise.the.stars;; is thinking was this a girlfriend of joes that died or is it like Taylor Swift or something or what? Can't wait for moreMay 23rd, 2010 at 10:11pm
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So I'm thinking this girls picture on their mantle is a girlfriend of Joe's that died tragically. Cancer, perhaps... Or even a car accident. I'm really loving this dear and I can't wait for more!!May 23rd, 2010 at 09:10pm
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Loved the update! Didn't like that Celia girl too much; she didn't have to act like that. :/ But I liked how you put Joe in there again, he lightened the chapter up. :) Can't wait for the next chapter! Update as soon as you can! :DMay 16th, 2010 at 07:47am
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I'M SO JEALOUS! I WANT TO MEET DENISE! NAO!!!!!! (yes I meant to spell it like that... I'll tell you on AIM why lol)
Loved it! I want more!May 15th, 2010 at 08:25pm
P.S.- I would follow your tumblr, but I don't have one. :( Sorry. :(