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  • ChemicallyAlive

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    It's beautifully depressing.
    I love it.
    It would've been even better if you'd have made it longer.
    You're an excellent author!
    Keep up the good work!
    December 2nd, 2013 at 03:16am
  • Poirot's Moustache

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    Lovely.

    I liked how you ended it. The whole "He can never be mine" thought. It was sad, yet beautiful in a way.
    November 16th, 2007 at 07:40pm
  • das nadine.

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    i like it , kei dear . (:

    but must it be so short ? -pout-

    your writing is pwnful .
    November 11th, 2007 at 09:09am
  • wishfinder

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    BEAUDIFUL! -^-____________________-^- Lovee it nana-in-law! ^^
    November 10th, 2007 at 08:49am
  • Hello Brooklyn.

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    -claps-REALLY nice job! I'm not really into frerards, but this one was really good. :D
    November 8th, 2007 at 05:20pm
  • Fueled By Dana

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    I'm jealous now! I want Gerard more than Frank. I loved this. It was very good. I liked how you told us what the resteraunt looked like. Very good. I wish it wasn't a one-shot.
    November 7th, 2007 at 10:11am
  • Dorian Gray

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    Beautiful :)
    November 7th, 2007 at 12:28am
  • ray_toro_is_hot

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    aww poor frankie!! he loves gerard so much!!!! great story i loved it!!!
    November 6th, 2007 at 07:24pm
  • Happy Laune

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    That was great. :)
    Im curious. what's gonna happen next? O.O
    poor Frank.
    Nice one Kei. :D
    November 5th, 2007 at 07:07pm
  • Flynn Rider

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    Me likey. No sex - not like I want or anything.
    It was a very, very cute frerard.

    Awww.... Frankie's jealous of Lyn-Z.
    Everyone is...even me -_-
    November 5th, 2007 at 06:57pm
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