Victims of the Clock - Comments

I love this. Everything about it was absolutely gorgeous.

First, the layout. Typically, I don't like plain layouts, that don't have many detail, and colours to them, but I loved yours. It had a nice color, that was calm, and went with the story. The picture was really cool, too.

The writing was gorgeous. I like song- fics. They give an insight to the meaning of lyrics, and tell a good story, through those lyrics. The way you used the lyrics, and then described everything the way that you did blew me away. It seemed like it all flowed together. It went in kind of a sequential order, and told a story based on the lyrics.

I praise you for writing this. You deserve great acclaim for this, and I'm giving you it. I love Rise Against, I love this song, and I love your writing. It was absolutely perfect for what it was.

Great Job, I was very impressed. (:

You are an amazing writer I loved it you should write another longer song fiction for this it was awesome €=

Cool as..I'm A Rise Against fan..so anything to do with RA I love...
and I love this song thingy as well

Dude, you're right, it's from dumb and dumber. Epic movie.

You're writing was great, the layout was neat and elegant and your writing went perfect with the lyrics. It wasn't over done and it flowed together in the perfect balance.

Dude you rock my socks.

Yes my brothers an ass, but I love him.

You won second place in my contest. Congratulations!!! Let me know which stories you wanted me to check out and comment on.

Thank you very much, both of you! It feels great to get such positive feedback. :)

I liked it. It was very poetic and you did a great job putting the lyrics in to fit the story line.

I loved the layout, it's so pretty. The story was awesome too. It's going to be hard to compete against you.