Love in Theory and Practice: Chapters 1-13 - Comments

"I'll keep an eye on your feet for you.."
Definite favorite! :) Such a sweet thing to say!

I'm curious to see what you'll do with the sequel, you have a subscriber in me.. whenever you may post it here.
Great job!
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I really hope there will be a sequel! I loved this story.

there should definitely be a sequel!!! i love this story!!!

yay for sequel!

Yay! I loved the ending! I hope the sequel is a happy one. I don't like sad.

Cuuute, christmas with the family. I could totally see them singing and making music together.

I say, A boy and a girl.. A momma's boy and a daddy's girl :P

I'd love it if you'd do a sequel :)
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I'm reading! Write a sequel and use my idea!

Yay, baby! I think it should totally be a girl. I just think that Ville would be such a cute dad to a little girl. :)

Yay! She told him. I love how thay went to an Avenged concert. Very nice. That was an awesome update, thank you. I ,personaly, think they should have a boy, 'cause usually in stories it's a girl.

Aww, you should totally write a sequel. I love this story and how it's wrote even if Elin is taking her sweet time. lol

I feel really bad for Elin. She obviously terrified about having a child, yet, at the same time, terrified about not having one. I just wish she would lean more on Ville, because he'll always be there to hold her when she needs to be held. I'm really looking forward to how the story is going to end, and I hope that it's a happy ending.

Please make it a happy ending! And if you make a sequel, which I'm starting to like the idea of, please make it happy too! I love happy things. <3

Nice. I really think she should tell Ville though. It would relieve the guilt that she's feeling. It could cause problems just like stress. Of course, Ville has to realise that's somethings up. Lol He's perceptive that way. Great job. I heart this story.

This is hands down one of the best Ville Valo fics I've read. It's extremely well written. I think a sequel would be perfect...... and I wonder is she ..O.O......pregnate? Is that why she's so moody and such? I'll definetly be watching for and update.

Nice chapter! I think it's a little weird that the honeymoon got crashed, but Elin didn't have a problem with it, so I guess it's no big deal. I really don't like the idea of a sequel for this story, unless you end the story on a happy note. The whole "I hate you and I'm leaving you!" at the end and then "OMG, I love you again!" in the sequel is so overrated. I feel like your story is better than that.

However, I wouldn't mind a sequel that expands on their life as a couple (and perhaps parents). A sequel that just describes their life, this way this one did, wouldn't be a bad thing.

I couldn't stop reading. This is the best story i've read in a while. You have a gift. Please keep updating <3

love how ville was suddenly inspired to write. twas cute :)

elin have no time for ville sounds exactly like my situation at the moment. i thought it was interesting to see how you described it all. great update :)

I totally disagree with user123. I think that's a really stereotypical idea, and you shouldn't ruin your story by doing that. Almost all stories that have sequels are like that, and I feel like this story isn't totally happy. In your story, Ville and Elin are facing real obstacles that affect real people.

I really love these latest chapters. I feel bad for Elin, having to give up school and all that. She made her own decision though, so it's alright. If they have a baby, I'll be so excited!

Anyway, I'm really happy with the way the story is going, but my bit of constructive criticism is that you don't end it on a bad note and then make a sequel. But, of course, it's all up to you. You're the omnipresent one in this story.

im in love with this story and i totally think you should make a sequel! i think a good idea would be for something to happen that makes them break up at the end of this story or a the beginning of the sequel. then the sequel should be about them not seeing each other for the next year or 2 and randomly be reunited. both of them having new partners but not really being in love with them since they cant get over their relationship with each other. obviously they wont admit that when they reunite. u know the little by little have things happening that will eventually bring them back together.
i just think this is a good idea to make the story a little different and not the typical story where they're always happy. what do you think?

looooooooooove! i swear, you add just the right type of little details and twists that make the story even more realistic. great update :)