I FINALLY GOT TO READ. I swear, work has totally taken over my life haha, it's so sad. Also, painful, because I need a serious foot/back massage, stat. This was cute though. I love how they're getting used to each others' company, and how Evelyn seems so carefree about everything and Garrett is still kind of walking on eggshells. And "your boyfriend" in Target, mmmm not her boyfriend yet, but don't worry, shop lady. Lalalalalalala. lol
Eeeeeee they're so cute. All... awkward and whatever. And I love how he's all fjdghs over the woman at Target calling him her boyfraaaannn. But let's face it, a few chapters down, and he'll be groveling for such a title. This was beaaaauutifullly written, per usual, boo. I want moreeeee (: CONGRATS ON GETTING BACK. Sucks about your burn though :/ Lots of love!
I absolutely adore Gare Bear so I'm a little biased, but I do love the way you are writing this story. I like the first chapter and the way you compared them to candy. I like that he cares but he doesnt at the same time. I like that she's funny and not playing the sympathy card. I like that she cusses but not too much. I LOVE that she LOVES physics ugh best subject ever it makes my insides tingle haha. Please keep writing and I promise will read and comment and laugh and love you forever. :D
I'm sad this is going to be your last story, since you are a really talented writer and I've loved every story of yours that I've read.
But, this is something different. I like that it's told from Garrett's perspective, it's third person, but we're inside his head rather than Evelyn's. You don't get that so much on here, so it's something quite refreshing to read. I love the whole idea. It could have been cliche, but it isn't. They aren't life long friends that have been in love since day one, they're practically strangers to each other. It's odd how Evelyn asked Garrett to take her on the road trip, but at the same time, I guess she wanted someone she didn't know so well, so maybe they wouldn't walk on eggshells around her. This trip is going to be really interesting and I'm looking forward to seeing how it unfolds and how Garrett and Evelyn get along together and what we find out about them.
this is really interesting and occasionally evelyn reminds me of alice, from alice in wonderland ahaha both are very cute, I see evelyn as a bit wide eyed
This is without a doubt, one of my new favorite stories on Mibba. You've got it all: the characters, the personalities, the emotions. I'm so curious about how the clash in personalities is going to evolve throughout the story. I'm completely hooked, darling. This is beautifully written, and your hold over your characters makes them witty, enchanting and mysterious, all at once. I can't wait for the rest of this, darling.
Okay, I had a lol moment right there XD I was on tumblr yesterday and saw a picture with a quote like that. If I still could find it I'd send you the link, but I think I lost it... :( Awesome update, makes me want to go on a road trip :)
I LUUUUURVE THIS. Also, how you subtly slipped in 1997. Mmmm, I think I might be the only one who actually appreciates that as much as you do. ;) And I luuuurve Evelyn, and how she doesn't have a plan, they're just going. That's awesome. You're fabulous. Idek what else to say, but I'm vaaaaair excited for this story.
I am so glad that the roadtrip has finally started. It seems like it will be a fun time. Also, is it ironic that I bought the book A Walk to Remember today?
Happy Melanie. They're so cute. He's so obviously trying to play cool, but let's face it, he doesn't know what the hell he's gon' do 'cause he loooooves her. Or will. Give him time to grow a pair enough to accept it ;) I'M SO EXCITED FOR THIS, BOO.