The Road You Can Take - Comments

  • ohitsbrooke

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    IM THE SAME WAY ABOUT CRANIUM! people try and cheat. pft. :D I love it
    November 25th, 2010 at 01:54pm
  • formerlyknownas

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    I FINALLY GOT TO READ.
    I swear, work has totally taken over my life haha, it's so sad. Also, painful, because I need a serious foot/back massage, stat.
    This was cute though. I love how they're getting used to each others' company, and how Evelyn seems so carefree about everything and Garrett is still kind of walking on eggshells.
    And "your boyfriend" in Target, mmmm not her boyfriend yet, but don't worry, shop lady. Lalalalalalala. lol
    June 24th, 2010 at 05:11pm
  • imXstillXfalling6

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    this is such a good story so far! Really looking forward to reading it more
    June 21st, 2010 at 07:12pm
  • laurawren

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    omg pictionary is so great and this is fun to read
    June 16th, 2010 at 11:22pm
  • Serendipity

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    just caught up with the story and i enjoy it thoroughly :)
    June 16th, 2010 at 10:25pm
  • Serendipity

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    i've just found this story and subscribed and i'm going to read it when i get home and i am seriously looking forward to it :)
    June 16th, 2010 at 04:42pm
  • crossed out name.

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    Eeeeeee they're so cute. All... awkward and whatever. And I love how he's all fjdghs over the woman at Target calling him her boyfraaaannn. But let's face it, a few chapters down, and he'll be groveling for such a title. This was beaaaauutifullly written, per usual, boo.
    I want moreeeee (:
    CONGRATS ON GETTING BACK. Sucks about your burn though :/ Lots of love!
    June 16th, 2010 at 08:12am
  • writing_wrongs

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    I absolutely adore Gare Bear so I'm a little biased, but I do love the way you are writing this story. I like the first chapter and the way you compared them to candy. I like that he cares but he doesnt at the same time. I like that she's funny and not playing the sympathy card. I like that she cusses but not too much. I LOVE that she LOVES physics ugh best subject ever it makes my insides tingle haha. Please keep writing and I promise will read and comment and laugh and love you forever. :D
    June 16th, 2010 at 06:08am
  • allison wonderland

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    Haha I hope the camera is a good one spending that kind of money on it ;D
    Also, I have never played pictionary.
    Is it fun?
    June 16th, 2010 at 05:50am
  • arizona skies.

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    I'm sad this is going to be your last story, since you are a really talented writer and I've loved every story of yours that I've read.

    But, this is something different. I like that it's told from Garrett's perspective, it's third person, but we're inside his head rather than Evelyn's. You don't get that so much on here, so it's something quite refreshing to read. I love the whole idea. It could have been cliche, but it isn't. They aren't life long friends that have been in love since day one, they're practically strangers to each other. It's odd how Evelyn asked Garrett to take her on the road trip, but at the same time, I guess she wanted someone she didn't know so well, so maybe they wouldn't walk on eggshells around her. This trip is going to be really interesting and I'm looking forward to seeing how it unfolds and how Garrett and Evelyn get along together and what we find out about them.
    June 13th, 2010 at 09:48pm
  • Cadet_Griggs

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    This is really amazing.
    My God, like, I-can't-catch-my-breath worthy : )
    June 10th, 2010 at 07:28am
  • easytiger.

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    “Holy shit, man, this isn’t A Walk to Remember.”
    Hahhaa.
    I think I'd pay to read/see them playing Mad Libs or something.

    And 1997 = good stuff.
    June 3rd, 2010 at 03:46am
  • laurawren

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    this is really interesting and occasionally evelyn reminds me of alice, from alice in wonderland ahaha both are very cute, I see evelyn as a bit wide eyed
    May 30th, 2010 at 05:27pm
  • HopefulRissa

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    Oh 1997. Quality band.
    And this is a quality story. I love her. She's way adorable.
    May 28th, 2010 at 04:06pm
  • summer girl.

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    This is without a doubt, one of my new favorite stories on Mibba. You've got it all: the characters, the personalities, the emotions. I'm so curious about how the clash in personalities is going to evolve throughout the story. I'm completely hooked, darling. This is beautifully written, and your hold over your characters makes them witty, enchanting and mysterious, all at once. I can't wait for the rest of this, darling.
    May 28th, 2010 at 07:24am
  • DeadToReality

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    Okay, I had a lol moment right there XD
    I was on tumblr yesterday and saw a picture with a quote like that. If I still could find it I'd send you the link, but I think I lost it... :(
    Awesome update, makes me want to go on a road trip :)
    May 28th, 2010 at 07:23am
  • formerlyknownas

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    I LUUUUURVE THIS.
    Also, how you subtly slipped in 1997. Mmmm, I think I might be the only one who actually appreciates that as much as you do. ;)
    And I luuuurve Evelyn, and how she doesn't have a plan, they're just going. That's awesome.
    You're fabulous. Idek what else to say, but I'm vaaaaair excited for this story.
    May 28th, 2010 at 06:38am
  • allison wonderland

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    I am so glad that the roadtrip has finally started.
    It seems like it will be a fun time.
    Also, is it ironic that I bought the book A Walk to Remember today?
    May 28th, 2010 at 05:43am
  • precursors

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    I really want to know why Evelyn is dying. It will be revealed, right? :)

    Update again soon :D
    May 28th, 2010 at 05:27am
  • crossed out name.

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    Happy Melanie.
    They're so cute.
    He's so obviously trying to play cool, but let's face it, he doesn't know what the hell he's gon' do 'cause he loooooves her. Or will. Give him time to grow a pair enough to accept it ;)
    I'M SO EXCITED FOR THIS, BOO.
    May 28th, 2010 at 05:14am