The Rollercoaster Life - Comments

Hi there. New reader here. Just wanted to say that I loved this story, but was so sad at the end. Poor Alex and Jency :-(. I'm off to read the sequel now!

I just started reading this story and I'm not done yet but:
Jack jumped off my lap, threw his head back and howled like a wolf. Knowing Jack like I do, things like this are a normal occurrence, and I knew as he dashed out of the room that I was supposed to follow him. I jumped up and jogged after him, as he wandered up and down the main hallway at Red Bull Studios, sniffing here and there like a bloodhound.

“Find it, Jack!” I encouraged, laughing. This kid never failed to crack me up. He howled again and galloped off, me following close behind. “Dog’s don’t gallop, Jack!”

“I’m a bloodhorse,” he shouted back, continuing to gallop.

I'm laughing my ass of right now.

i cried....that usualy doesnt happen..but i cried.....its just so...ugh great story though

God. It's over.

I mean. Wow. Poor Alex. And Jency.

Amazing chapter though, it ended the story well.

Sadness :(

I swear to God the last chapter made me cry a little bit.

Crazy as it sounds, I really appreciated how you ended this. It was raw, and unhappy, but it was the truth. I'm glad that you didn't magically turn things around at last minute because sometimes people don't get happy endings, even when they're deserving of them.

Great job with this story.

:-( So freakin sad!
I need to got subscirbe and read the sequel immediatly!!

This story is amazing!

NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! THERE IS NO MORE!!! why isn't there anymore....please don't have him leave before she has a chance to tell him that she does not hate him!!!!!

holy mother freaking cheese. i come back from partying it up on my birthday weekend, and find these chapters. so i repeat, holy mother freaking cheese. if there's only one chapter left, then there must be a sequel. MUST. i will be sad otherwise. well, sadder than i am now. i can't remember why i haven't commented until now, but i should have. there's only one thing to say right now, ¡UpdateUpdateUpdate! .........and make there be a sequel. that's two things. Dang!

Omg Eric didn't need to punch him he got enought shit from Holden. I wish I had an older brother to help me with heartbreak like that

Oh my God!
you left me hanging!
Can't wait for the next chapter!

My guess is that he leaves before she gets to him in the morning.

Holy Shit!
I am sooooo sad right now:-(
She was going to give him another chance but Holden and Eric had to get all up in there business:-(
I really hope he doesnt leave before Jency comes and sees him, but I kinda think thats gonna happen:-(
Only one more!!!! I'm even more sad!

I'm actually crying right now.
And just so you know, it's not very common that stories evoke that kind of response from me.
I just came across this story today, and I haven't been able to stop reading it since I started. It's beautifully written and I feel honored knowing that you read my stuff, too.

Is there any hope for a sequel though?

"One more chapter! Sad times. But thank, you all for your support and everything. I've loved writing this and you guys have made all the work worth it!!!"

Wait. There's only one more chapter left? Sad now.

Oh, and "travesty" in the first line of chapter 20. <3

I freaking hate Holden right now. I mean,I get that he's pissed, but Alex an Jency belong together and need to have babies (after they get married) and live happily ever after. I freaking want the next chapter to see what happens!!!!!!