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Right now I can leave my judge like comment =P

I loved the story, it was very simple and to the point. It fitted with the paragraph well, it was basically what you could come up with if you read that paragraph, so nicely done.
No mistakes as far as i could see, pretty layout, and summary was all good.
The story flowed well, and had all the characteristics of a cute, yet depressing, one shot.
Excellent entry.

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The kiss was quick, brief, and almost unfilled with emotion. The kiss was empty.

I really liked this sentence. It's just says..so much in so little.

Loved it dear. :)
Very good.

And now im unhappy.....gosh!!! lol sad story :)
most excellent though!!!!!! I actually loved it...scarily one of my friends is called karl and i think if he ever did that to me, id kill him!! So i may have laughed a little bit!! But wow :)
awesomeness!!!
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