Afghans Built This Land - Comments

SHYLA01 (350)

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This is a really good chapter; you have a nice writing style. :)

January 10th, 2011 at 05:06pm

Critical_Lemon (100)

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Ahhh, yeah, I think i did.......I think I decided it was nine then changed my mind partway through and I didn't realise. Sorry everyone. It should be 13.

November 7th, 2007 at 01:43pm

Bellkura (100)

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*nods approvingly* Very good writing. Is yummy to read, although I tripped up over a few bits because they were a bit awkward.

I do have to agree with DubDub though, you did [seem to] mention more than nine people.

November 7th, 2007 at 01:15pm

Monkey-Turtle (100)

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Qué bien!

Tu historia es apasionante. Escribes más, por favor.

Hah! behold the power of my Spanish!

By the way... you said there was a population of nine. But you mentioned more than nine people.

Just thought I'd point it out.

November 7th, 2007 at 11:06am

purple haze. (220)

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awesome :]
i like it!
carry on!

read mine?

November 6th, 2007 at 08:44pm