Somewhere Over the Rainbow - Comments

For people saying there isn't enough for it to make sense, I certainly don't agree.
A lot can be said in a few words. The use of 'young' for Frank and 'older' for Gerard and the way Frank just goes with what Gerard says, trusts him even though he doesn't understand, well, that said a lot to me. I think you said what needed to said in this and more would have made it less beautiful and raw. I love it and I'm glad I stumbled across it :)

Oh, this is so ridiculously heartbreaking for such a small amount of words.
I love the kind of, secrecy of it, you don't know why they can't be together, you just know they can't and that's why it's sad.
Really beautiful way of writing, it's gorgeous.

That's sad.
Uh, and I think I get it. I might not, but I'll just pretend I do.
I don't think it needs anything more to make sense either btw. I liked it this way.

I don't get it. Make atleast another chapter as a follow up. It's short and not that informing but it could be a good story or one-shot if there was more to it.

ahem, confusing. plz update again so it makes more sense!