I Was Never Touched, Until I Met You... - Comments

I got this through comment swap, and I only read the first chapter. I think you have a great idea for a story here, it's just some of the writing seems jumbled towards the beginning of the chapter and it was hard for me to get through. You might want go back and do some editing; their were a lot of typos/misspellings and a few sentences just need some cleaning up. Good luck with this story though!

Is jeff apart of mathews mind is mat schitzophrenic

Ohhh. D:!!! poor things!! DX!!! BAD JEFFERY!!! GO AWAY! XP!!!
Poor Matthew. I hope that things look up very soon.

Welcome back! :D!!!

Jeff is such a yuck!!!!!! I don't like him one bit!!!! XPP!!!!!!!!!!!!! He keeps torturing them!! and i love them!!! I think that I can like Matthew a lot now. He's pretty awesome. That was awful sweet of him to do that. :)
Poor Katherine. She's just so stressed out. Poor thing.
Oh my goodness!!!!!!!!!! Yay!!!!!!!!!! hmmm... I don't know though!!! I kinda really want Jeff to just disappear but.... I know that that can't happen yet.. hmmmm....
can I be in the story???!!! =]!!!!!!! That'd be awesome!!!! XD!!!!!!!!!

oh no!!! scary!!!!!
Aww they love each other. :) That's just soo cute!!!
Okay, I'm better now. I can like Matthew. Jeff is still a jerk even though he's a hallucination.
I love Katherine, but we already knew that. :)

you are not a sorry, block up, dumbo, silly, meanie of an author. Writer's block is awful and I completely understand.
That was really sad.:( Poor thing. I'm actually kinda glad that Matthew was there. Even though he's kinda a little iffy in my book.
That was an amazing description, and completely heartfelt.

I will totally be a golden bunny!!! YES!!!
he's not entirely crazy. he did the right thing. Now the wet dream part . . . I don't have anything to say to that.
I think that it's kinda endearing. He's a sweety.
more soon? please??? =D!!

omg man i LOVE it!!! i would soo write summin like that but i can never seem to get the flippin idea....ah well.....more soon PLZ!!!!!

I really like this...
And that's just awesome, she bought him an iPod and a laptop, and a whole room...
And I agree with whoever called Jeff a yuck. He is indeed a yuck.
Subscribing! Update soon.

Omg update :D
love the story!!
I want a roommate like her!!!
She's awesome!
-leaves u a. Cookie;

Yay!!
It was amazing, but if that was Jeff, the yuck, I think that I'll be screaming up a storm pretty soon here. (I have amazing insults don't I? hehe just kidding.)
She's amazingly accomidating!! I would kill to have a roommate like that.
I love it!!! :)

Loved the chapter! I can't wait to read more. I'm curious to see who the other roommate is. You might have mentioned it and I probably didn't catch it.

Muhuhahaha!!! First comment!!!
I really like it. Jeff is a yuck.
I love the psychiatrist!! She's hilarious, and I wish that the typical one was like that. more soon please!!?? :)