They're going on Oprah!?!? That's fantastic! And, I hope they can set everyone straight on their relationship. And Shaun can tell her he loves her on national television ;) I'm so sad that this story is ending, but I can't wait to see how exactly you do end it and to read some new stories from you =)
While I'm glad that things are seemingly back to normal between the two of them, I'm still waiting on Shaun to take the leap and say those three little words =)
Oh Molly, snooping around! But, maybe it's a good thing that she knows--that Casey can talk to her, too, about it. And, I really do hope that Shaun tells her he loves her soon enough! More soon =)
I've just read both stories in one sitting!! This is sooo amazing! The story just captivates me. :] And I think there should be a positive magazine article. I just think it'd be kind of cute and ironic if the thing that kind of got them on the rocks fixed it. :]] Just an idea. I can't wait for the next update!! *subscribing*
Uh oh, what's Mason going to do? It's going to go one of two ways: either it's going to go amazingly well, and he's going to talk some sense into Shaun and make him realize he needs to tell Casey he loves her; or, it's going to go amazingly terrible, and he's going to hurt their relationship. I'm seriously hoping it's the first option =)
ASDFGHJKL;QWERTYUIOPZXCVBNM,.!!!!! XD I'mma so a happy! :D You even have the accent sign in there! *Hands over plate of cyber-brownies* Win. Seriously. No one ever gets it right. OTHER than that exciting experince, I'm kind of Nervous about Mason opening that big, cute mouth of his. Mason reminds me of Jack Bauer from 24. Always has to mess things up somehow. xD Jk.
Once again, I'm sorry that I got so far behind on this story, but I've finally caught up. And, I can't believe I've missed so much! I'm glad that Shaun stuck by her when she was worried about getting back into riding, and that he waited until she was ready to get back into the swing of things. But, I feel super bad for her, especially in that last chapter, since he still hasn't said 'I love you'. We all know she's been waiting forever for him to say it, and he was oh so close! And, sorry that I can't think of anything to ask Casey right now!
wow. that was awkward...I love...how you accept me xP oh shaun... :) question for casey....umm...when will you start competing again? aha! thats a good one :D i love this story :D ~Mahalianna ♥♥♥
Son of a bitch! asdfghjkl;' >.< That was shady, Shaun. REal bad ju ju. What a way to play with someone's emotions, you Dbag. >.> Question for Case: "When the f*ck are you going to knock Shaun upside the head?" Ha, JK. Erm, I dunno what to ask. =/ And: 1. Yeppers. 2. YES!
Lovely, as usual! Adored the chapters, plot is coming along nicely. :) How long is the time period between her breakdown and wanting to try again, I don't know if you put it and I just missed it or if it wasn't there haha. I think, but this is just me, you know how I am about this stuff, I would give a little more detail about the feel and look of the slope when she starts riding again. It could be a little more involved. Also, I think if she fell a few times it would give it a more realistic feel. Her leg would be weaker and that should throw her off at least a bit. Maybe the first time she falls, she wants to give up and then Shaun convinces her to try again. The second time she's just pissed and determined to do better. Then she's home free. Also she could be shaking in her seat the whole car ride, or something like that. You know, just little things. But I absolutely love this one, I think because the characters seem REAL. Not a lot of people can pull that off. Great job once again! Love you!!
That's fantastic!
And, I hope they can set everyone straight on their relationship.
And Shaun can tell her he loves her on national television ;)
I'm so sad that this story is ending, but I can't wait to see how exactly you do end it and to read some new stories from you =)