January 2nd, 2008 at 05:06am
The Truth Hurts Worse - Comments
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I kinda thought the plot was over used, ya know? It was kinda like reading some other story but with different characters. You seem like a writer with good potential. Pick your own plot, make up a story line. My opinion is that one shots are used for suicides and sex. I think you can do better. With a little bit more description combined with the writing style you have, I think you can do better.November 12th, 2007 at 09:57am
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Great job.
That was a really nice story...just shows what love can do to you.
The only critizism I have is, as Vampire Queen said, more details wouldn't do any harm.
Great job, though. [:
For your next story?
You're excellent at one-shots, and I'm sure you'd be good with any other story you'd write too, but maybe a Frerard or Waycest to mix it up.
xoxoNovember 11th, 2007 at 07:00am -
I liked this one, it was really good, now i know the meaing of one- shots= one chapter ... im slow lolNovember 9th, 2007 at 04:54am
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It was a bit short but still really good.
Maybe you could put a bit more detail.
Loved it. = 3November 8th, 2007 at 02:05pm -
Awww thank you :] *hugs*
Loves xxxNovember 7th, 2007 at 03:43pm -
Thats was sad and ... kinda beautiful, I loved it, Love can be so harsh sometimesNovember 7th, 2007 at 07:01am
and for the authors note thingy, can i choose both? ^^ :p
ur an AWESOME writer Toni!!
write more when u can pweeze!
oxoxox