Fighter - Comments

I WANNA LEARN THEIR LESSONS! =( xD hahaha. Good job! =D

....Sorry about the double posting.....computer connection is a total Heidi Montag. (Translation: stupid ass). Aha! :)

Ok. So I love this story and I love this story enough to re-read from the beginning. Again. And again. Only one author has made me wanna do that no matter how addictive their work. Awesome job!!!! =D

Ok. So I love this story and I love this story enough to re-read from the beginning. Again. And again. Only one author has made me wanna do that no matter how addictive their work. Awesome job!!!! =D

Again I say. Used my characters better then me. And your fight scenes are AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Girl, kickass job! =D

I still love this. Thanks for including my characters! =D By the way you dont have to change my name in previous chapters if I change it. Haha xD I didnt want you to be confused. I cant wait for the fight to begin next chapter!!! Girl you made my characters fucking amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =D =D =D =D =D

I love this story, action, fast-paced, unknown love... it could be a great action movie. Can't wait till the next chapter.

The only thing you got wrong was the gender. *points to the Gender : thing under story comment section username* >xD Love it. =)

I love it! And I love James! Even if he is kinda a tool sometimes but he's totally gonna win her back rightt?? *hint hintt* Keep writing!

Dude!!!!!!!!!!! I love it!!!!!! Keep writin chickie!!!! XD You must or i will be very disappointed in yooh. Lol. jk.

This is so flipping epic! More! More!

Fast paced and packed full of action. Watch out for when you say eg. 'I grab my bag' then suddenly 'I backed the car out.' Write either in past tense or present, not both. Besides for the misuse of tenses and other little grammatical thing-a-ma-bobs I enjoy reading this story. I hope you update soon!

~Might I suggest paragraphs? It is very hard on the eyes. Oh and quick remark, but there is a small blue button on the top left hand of the site, it sais "Spell check" and you might want to try it.

Psst~ Brang and Chaseing are not words.

Love the creepy relationship they have.

This would make a really good action movie. Hahaha.

But I do suggest you get an editor for this. You have a lot of grammatical errors that are simple mistakes even the greatest writers make. (Hah. I rhymed.)

Other than that, I really enjoyed this.

James is such a creeper :) But that makes it all the more fun :))