Tear it up. - Comments

Wow What a jerk!!
Awesome story so far!!
Can't wait for more!!!

loved the update
never thought things would get this bad when she tried to move on
can't wait for more

hey whatever happened to this story

great update heads up though you double posted but i think she should try to find a new guy to make jorel jealous then he can say his feelings
more soon?

oh no! he did not just tell her that!! what an asshole!
Jay seriously needs to get his fucking act together!!
but that Carey..or Corey?? (idr. lol) is flippin annoying
sorry, but i can't really stand her right now. haha more
soon :)

wonder what she is going to tell him?
more soon?

not that bad of a story so far,
interested to see where it will go.

jay's asshole-ness is irritating and sexy at the same
time...don't know why. it just is :) haha. love the
update. their relationship is pretty effed up if you ask
me. but i can't wait to see where this goes. more soon!

loved the update
wonder what's going to happen next

I like it sweets, my advice worked well in this.

I love it. I can't wait for the next one.... You're amazing!

this is a really great start
can't wait for more

not too bad for your first story's first chapter :)
hahaha. i like how jay's an ass and audrey just
gives into him...then again, who can deny him
of anything! right?? lol. can't wait to see where
you take this. more soon!

I love it... Keep going!!! :D

Not bad for your first. I'll be waiting for more.

Woah. Cliffhanger in the end.

Jay is an ass... but a sexy ass though. I love him to pieces. Good beginning. Can't wait for more.