great update heads up though you double posted but i think she should try to find a new guy to make jorel jealous then he can say his feelings more soon?
oh no! he did not just tell her that!! what an asshole! Jay seriously needs to get his fucking act together!! but that Carey..or Corey?? (idr. lol) is flippin annoying sorry, but i can't really stand her right now. haha more soon :)
jay's asshole-ness is irritating and sexy at the same time...don't know why. it just is :) haha. love the update. their relationship is pretty effed up if you ask me. but i can't wait to see where this goes. more soon!
not too bad for your first story's first chapter :) hahaha. i like how jay's an ass and audrey just gives into him...then again, who can deny him of anything! right?? lol. can't wait to see where you take this. more soon!
Awesome story so far!!
Can't wait for more!!!