i love this and i usually dont common on a lot of stories but i had to on this one everything in the story was perfect and well thought keep up the good work and i cant wait till you update
ooo bet the elders will decide that they wont start a war!!!!!!!!!!! hehe Cant wait to read more and i bet Sam's pissed now cuz he's losin another member ;]
I have decided you don't have enough comments, especially for this story to be this good so I'm going to comment everytime you update. I still want some more Jake and Lil time just them. I love their relationship ,the way Jake feels about her and her him. I feel like we should have a chapter just from Jake's point of view. Please update soon!!!!!!
i fell in love with the first "back to life" story, i love how the chapters are so long and you write SO WELL. and the plot is amazin. plz plz plz plz plz plz keep writing. love it.
I love love love love love love love this series....its so cute and it has its drama. You describe everything so perfectly and I cannot wait for more. I'm happy you didn't make her pregnant its such a cliche and is used on numerous occasions.
I love how you made the...intimate parts...the howl makes me giggle everytime because I really picture that happening. The dares got me laughing ESP when kim had to admit she thought of her and jared doing the dirty in his wolf form XD weird! Lol
I cannot wait for the next post update soon.
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I love your story but sometimes you switch up your povs. Like Jake will be in 2nd then it will switch to first. But I love your story I hope I didn't offend you.
Most deffantly a brilliant start to the next story. i fell in love with the first one. i love how the chapters are so long! its hard to find stories like that xx