The Begining - Comments

Edward Cullen14 (100)

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I like this, it is really good. Can't wait for the next chapter, though there could have been more detail in these. Other than that it is great, can't wait to read more!
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November 21st, 2007 at 10:38am

Wild Thing. (100)

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Pretty good so far. I also agree with Olivia and Gemmaa to go with a little more detail but I can't wait for the next chapter.
Taylor
xoxo

November 12th, 2007 at 08:51am

shwayze. (150)

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This is very interesting so far.

I do agree with Gemmmaa, a little more detail and description will go a long way.
But great job so far. I'm looking forward to reading more.

November 11th, 2007 at 12:31am

it's a gemmaface. (100)

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Hmm...
Right.
Yay... first comment! Whoop.
Anyway. I do actually like this. I think that it's abit too secretive, like what happened when the box fell, what was Lilli thinking.
I tihnk if you put a bit more description in it would be a bit more interesting, although I do like it.

November 8th, 2007 at 07:38am