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  • KillLui

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    This is the second time I've read this, but I don't think I made it to the end the first time I read it, so I'll just comment now :D
    Even though I don't really like Toots (it's basically her fault Oxy got infected) I also think that this shows that even a tiny decision can turn your life around and affect everyone around you. It also shows that everyone has flaws - Piper is just a bit selfish and very, very stubborn, which, in the end, kills Oxy. But hey, that's life.

    I thought this story was hilarious (except the ending, that was just sad!) and I've had a lot of laughs this evening from reading it. Great job, and I like the originality - especially in Oxy, I mean, he's priceless.

    xo
    May 28th, 2012 at 08:58pm
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    This is the second time I've read this, but I don't think I made it to the end the first time I read it, so I'll just comment now :D
    Even though I don't really like Toots (it's basically her fault Oxy got infected) I also think that this shows that even a tiny decision can turn your life around and affect everyone around you. It also shows that everyone has flaws - Piper is just a bit selfish and very, very stubborn, which, in the end, kills Oxy. But hey, that's life.

    I thought this story was hilarious (except the ending, that was just sad!) and I've had a lot of laughs this evening from reading it. Great job, and I like the originality - especially in Oxy, I mean, he's priceless.

    xo
    May 28th, 2012 at 08:58pm
  • In Utero;

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    Oh no. ]: Wonderful story. Sad ending.
    April 1st, 2012 at 02:57pm
  • She Said Poptarts

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    Okay, this is the second time I read this story..
    And Whitney .. None of your characters ever pissed me off so damn much! I don't care if Piper was fucking pregnant! She is so fucking stupid!! >__< I wanted to jump in the damn story and rip her hair out! Ah.

    Sigh. The story was awesome, because it was zombies. But Piper still pissed me off.
    Haha. Shit.
    September 3rd, 2011 at 10:32am
  • GalaxyGirl

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    That was amazing.
    But... OH MY FUCKING GOD HOW COULD YOU KILL HIM!?!?!!!!???
    You guys are fucking crazy. Oxy is... OXY!! UGH! I got all teary eyed...
    Im angry at you :C Oxy is amazing and should live!!!! GRRR >:O
    It was still an amazing story. read it all in one night :D
    But im sad :C
    January 23rd, 2011 at 09:23am
  • Discontinued

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    Wow....I sorta saw that ending coming, but then again I didn't. Who would have thought that Oxy would be the one to die. Hell I didn't even think that they would even have made it to Florida. Yeah Toots, haha, shouldn't have been selfish and then Oxy would probably still be breathing. Other then that I really enjoyed reading the story. You both are phenomenal writers.
    ~Reena
    November 17th, 2010 at 04:38am
  • bloodravyn

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    wow, poor oxy!
    died because she was too selfish to be anything but a bother!
    November 14th, 2010 at 08:24am
  • LindsaySometimes

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    Love this story. Yall are great writers
    October 11th, 2010 at 07:10pm
  • for i have syn

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    love this story. beyond one of my favs. perfect story for my zombie week for resident evil. lol.
    September 6th, 2010 at 09:55am
  • blueyes775

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    You should put up an the alternate ending lol
    September 5th, 2010 at 08:07am
  • Firefever

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    This was an incredible story! I love the realistic part of it. I'm actually glad you showed her having an happy ending with her son, instead of like a picture perfect family.
    August 30th, 2010 at 02:00pm
  • Alsoldey

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    This was an amazing story. Kudos. :D
    August 28th, 2010 at 07:57pm
  • whereforeartthou-xo

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    l really like how it turned out, original and seems more realistic. :)
    August 28th, 2010 at 06:11am
  • becky1313

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    sad ending ;( but i like it! glad u finally finished the story :)
    August 28th, 2010 at 05:57am
  • castiel_

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    why did you kill him?!?!
    i cried!
    August 28th, 2010 at 05:41am
  • Shadowsgirl

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    Oh no!
    I can't belive it! it's not fair! he can't die!
    I cried so hard reading this!
    I want Oxy back!
    update please
    August 27th, 2010 at 09:47pm
  • xohunnyxo

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    GAHHHH totally didn't see that coming. I can't believe thats the end!!! You.Killed.Oxy. ='(
    August 27th, 2010 at 07:27pm
  • blueyes775

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    What the hell...... Thats soooo sad... this is not cool!
    August 27th, 2010 at 06:59pm
  • Hayweed

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    WHAAAT. NOOOOOO!
    DX
    PLEASE TELL ME IT'S A DREAAAM!
    u________u
    August 27th, 2010 at 02:50pm
  • hips and bones

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    i am really hoping you guys show that it's a dream please! :(
    August 27th, 2010 at 10:44am
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