Till Death Do Us Part - Comments

That was amazing. You know it's true art when you phase out while reading, which I did. I completely ignored my surroundings and it turns out people were talking to me and I couldn't even tell.
Your writing style is amazing and the only thing I could ask for is a little more paragraphs. It's a little disorienting to read blocks of texts and I would find myself rereading or skipping lines.
But that's just something technical. =)

Thank you so much for posting such a lovely piece of writing.
Keep up the good work.

--♠Amphetamines

That was BEAUTIFUL. You have a great talent.
The fact that it was obvious what was going to happen only made the suspense build up. It was heartfelt without being cliched at all in any way. Perfect.
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awesome!

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That was amazing.

EVen though it was obvious what was going to happen from the start, the manner in which you executed it was amazing.

I loved the fact that there are questions that remain unanswered. Leaves the story with an oddly satisfying ending. Leaves it with some mystery.

Loved it, in a weird way