A Kind of Magic - Comments

  • Panic! At The Disco.

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    ::smirks and shakes my head in amusement::
    Only Cas...
    The guy is so hilarious, and he doesn't know it.
    October 14th, 2010 at 04:32am
  • generalmill

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    wow :) this is amazing, and so sweet! <3
    write more SPN fanfictions :D yus?
    July 27th, 2010 at 12:32pm
  • Dusk-Til-Dawn

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    This story is simply amazing. I love it!
    April 22nd, 2010 at 03:32am
  • The Samurai Girl

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    Beautiful!
    This was simply lovely, loved the way you described every action.

    Bravo, ten times bravo! :)
    Wish you good luck in the contest as well!
    April 11th, 2010 at 11:24am
  • evie may.

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    I'm so tempted to start and end this comment with 'tehe... Cas' but I know I shouldn't.

    Basically, this was wonderful. It was canon, it was sweet and I love the kind of childlike Cas that people don't write often enough.

    All the reasons this was amusing and perfect:

    Cas researching. Cas at the library. Cas watching Dr. Sexy MD. Cas ignoring personal space. Cas making everything uncomfortable. Cas making everything better.

    And there we go. Also, this was my favourite line in the world:

    But Castiel can also see the small smile reserved for well-it's-Cas situations appearing on Dean's lips, and he smiles as well.

    So funny, so true.

    The only thing I can find that needs fixing in this is just a few spelling errors, the occasional extra word that isn't needed. It can be easily remedied with just a quick edit.

    Apart from that tiny detail, I loved this.

    :)
    March 15th, 2010 at 01:59am
  • larsus

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    This was perfect.

    I love Cas's obliviousness- in Canon and in the fanfiction world, and this was absolutely perfect. I can just visualize Cas saying “Fixing you, of course,” with his slightly tilted head and a confused frown on his face.

    I loves this, so much.
    :D
    March 14th, 2010 at 07:20pm