Just so you don't think I abandoned the story, I'm telling you now that I just finished it. Hm...overall, it seems to be a simple version of the Twilight story, turned ito a high-school-age setting. Criminal Minds!!!!! I wish it ould be about Morgan tho :/
please tell me that Jacob is NOT going to fall for Andii?? Even though it would be funny Eddie's reaction, i think it would way too cliche to do so. IF (and is a big IF) there's going to be a love triangle, i think Eddie against "hotter vampire" ( maybe someone like Damon Salvatore kind of hot or Eric Northman kind of hot who btw is the sexiest vampire EVER...anyway im getting way too distracted with talking about hot vamps. lol) would be more interesting and specially different from the other million fanfics that i've read which are the typical "leech"vs"dog" thing. Well this is just my opinion. Is your story so you get to write it the way you want it :) I was just expressing my thoughts.