I like how well you write Alex's choppy English. Most people write him with perfect English and it's like "have you HEARD the boy speak English?!" Lol. I enjoyed this a lot. Though, for a bit of advice, fix the paragraphing because it's a bit tedious to read when it's not formatted properly. It might just be Mibba's screw up, though. Who knows.
Alexxxxxxxxxxxx. I loves this and cannot wait to see what's to come :D
And you see the girl in the comment above me? She's my BFF and a TOTAL closet Alex-fan. She even DREAMS about him. Therefore, you need to write more of this epicness and convert her :P