Happy Now? - Comments

I liked this. I really did. Even though she hated a lot of it, some of the memories she listed were pretty sweet-sounding. This whole body feels like it was just wrought of raw emotion and I liked how open it felt as well. You did a good job, I believe.

I also noticed you didn't close your letter, aha. No worries. C: It was still amazing. And I agree with Bull; the beginning line cracked me up, too. It just gave you a preview of what this story would be like, in a way.

Great Job. (:

"Dear slimy low-life scumbag Rob."

That cracked me up. I don't know why, but it did.

This is an interesting story. I like how it was set up, and the feeling in it. Good job.

I liked this, how you just let everything out.
It gave the letter more emotion than if you'd dressed it all up.