Liar Liar - Comments

I like this one. And it didn't have the happy ending, which I liked A LOT!
I also like the fact that Erin spoke her mind.

:}

They swear a lot O_O.
Any ways, I liked this. It was really well written. =]
I wish that there was an extra chapter so that Erin and Axl could make up and love each other.
I'm a sucker for a happy ending. =X

I really like this,
and how you included the rest of the members instead of just the fighting.
You're a great writer. (:

Wooow... Usually I see those happy endings, no matter how fricken sad the beginning and/or middle is.
So sad's a nice change.

'Course, I always say that about sad stuff, no matter how much I've seen of it...

But originality wise, it was good. A fan fic that isn't like them as regular people or before they became famous. And, on a tour.
You know, I never would've seen that one coming.

I also liked how it wasn't just the fight, it had the other people in there too. A lot of people tend to ignore the other band members in stories (somewhat) like this.

Sooo, anyways, good job :D

“Yeah I’m the fucking strongest here Izzy I also have a fucking broken ankle. What the hell do you want me to do go and fucking hobble out then and stick my cast up Erin’s ass?”

that made me laugh really hard X)

D: and the end made me ubber sad! I loved it though ^-^