The Bitter Sweetness of Sunny Days - Comments

Wow, that was great. I liked the concept (more than I did when I came up with it...) and the whole chaptered thing :D

It was a nice story about death (as horrible as that sounds.)

I liked the descriptions, but just try to watch some of the past/present tenses.

Other than that, it was great :)

*Gasp* You mean person!! >:) No cookie for you!!! D:

I liked it, but noooo, she took them! D: Grrr :((