Arizona - Comments

This was pretty much stunning. Beautiful language, and God, could I relate to it on sooo many levels. Not just having lived in Tucson virtually all my life, and by the way, totally feel the same about it, although I still loved the sunsets but hate how AZ and racism issues are becoming like PB&J except not in a good way. But yah. We should totally bond sometime over our ambivalent feelings towards this little old city. Amazing job, and I want to read more of these!

It's really good. I liked it so much....

I love the banner, it's so simple. I agree that there were a lot of things unsaid, and that's okay. Good story, and congratulations. :)

wow i used to read one of your old stories
and your writing has improved so much!
this short story is beautiful!
:)

HEY MY LOVE.
THIS IS SOOO GOOD.
YOU SHOULD BE PROUD OF IT. :)

Wow.
Wow,
Wow.
Just... wow.
Haha, seriousy that was really good.
Personally I think it's the ultimate best entered in towers' contest so far. By a mile. =D

Oh my God, I loved this.
This would make such an amazing story.
This makes me miss Arizona so much though.