OH, YEAH! I loved that. John kissing Zack and slipping his hand under his shirt against the door was freaking priceless. HAHA, I'm such a perv, darn it! xD
By the way... the 'my' in “If um…If you wanted to come keep my company, I wouldn’t –” is supposed to be "me", right? :/ Also, I noticed you spelt 'accidentally' wrongly back there. [:
Gosh... I think I might be starting to like this more than the original Jalex pairing in Dirty Little Secrets. Haha, nah, I think they're tied. [;
Don't listen to Jack!!! They kissed!! sooo cute!!! Jack will eventually get over it. (shh it's a secret) kidding. sorry I'm spazzy tonight. I love it! have fun tomorrow!! :D!!
so i'm grinning like a kid on christmas. i love this story. i'm soooo excited. :3 the ~forbiddenness is what makes it soooo amazing. you're an awesome writer. and i love all of your stories. xD
Hot damn! John is being quite assertive with Zack. I can tell that the dynamic of their relationship is going to be interesting. As always, I can't wait to read more.
But only seconds after trying to make himself all but invisible, someone is pressing his shoulders against the wall and they press their own leg between his. Looking up, Zack finds himself looking into the eyes of John.
“Hello.”
Zack gapes at John for a second, staring up at the tall boy. As John stares down at him, grinning ear to ear, Zack blushes. “Um. Hi.”
“Told you I’d be seeing you around.”
“Yeah…you did.”
ANDDDDDDDDDD, OMG, ANDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD:
Once the two have turned the corner and are waiting for the elevator to come, John leans up against the wall and smirks.
“So tell me this, how come a cute guy like you is inside on the weekend? Shouldn’t you be out and partying and all that shit teenagers do?”
“I would but…I don’t have any friends and it’s not like my dad encourages it. He’d rather I just stay home. And – wait…you think I’m cute?”
John smirks again just as the elevator doors open. He pushes Zack inside and quickly presses the ‘close door’ button four times. “I think you’re fucking gorgeous,” he says as the doors close. “But, it’d be very, very wrong of me to act upon that thought, wouldn’t it?”
GAH. Sorry for all the quoting from your stories. I can NOT freaking help it! AH, I love the last line. Loveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveit!!! >.<
The cliffhanger is killlllllllinggggg meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. D:
I know you said this is just a side story... but it is freaking AH-MAY-ZING.
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHOOOOOOOOOOOOO. If you've read your comments on Bittersweet Life, you probably would have guessed that I'mma post two comments for the two chapters on this thing. :D
The first chapter was AMAZING. I freaking love John right now.
Zack is pulled from his thoughts and quickly nods. “Yeah, that’s me.”
“So you’re Boss’ son.”
The amusement in his voice is even more obvious now, and Zack’s polite smile falters a slight bit. John’s grinning and Zack wants to know why.
“Yeah…”
“So you’re probably off-limits, huh?”
Zack’s heart all but stops and he nearly chokes on his own breath. He stares up at John and opens his mouth to respond, but he just ends up looking like a fish out of water. Once he regains his composure and figures out exactly what he wants to say, that’s when Nancy decides to come back into the room.
HELL YEAH! [x
There wasn't much on him and Zack's relationship in Dirty Little Secrets - so I'm definitely ecstatic about this side story you have going on. :D
I am procrastinating soooooo bad right now thanks to your amazing stories. >.< And by the way, you should DEFI-FREAKING-NITELY post all those stories you've written! I'd loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee to read them. >3
John kissing Zack and slipping his hand under his shirt against the door was freaking priceless. HAHA, I'm such a perv, darn it! xD
By the way... the 'my' in “If um…If you wanted to come keep my company, I wouldn’t –” is supposed to be "me", right? :/ Also, I noticed you spelt 'accidentally' wrongly back there. [:
Gosh... I think I might be starting to like this more than the original Jalex pairing in Dirty Little Secrets. Haha, nah, I think they're tied. [;
UPDATE SOON! :D