WIN. I LOVED IT. ADJKLASDJAMDALDADADADA OMG JOSH, GAH, SHE IS A BITCH. LEAVING HIM LIKE THAT, HOEBAG. YEAH I COMMENTED, MEANING I UPDATED ;D THIS WAS BRILL, MORE~. XO
wow, i really liked it! it was a good idea to do a flashback :-) i think next chapter should be another flashback too can't wait for the next chapter now!x
I liked the idea of a flashback, although at first I got confused as to what was going on and everything, but once I realised what was going on, I got into it. Update again soon?
I feel so sorry for Josh more than anyone else, I do think that she's probably going to go back down for like a holiday or something, maybe vise versa... I thought that it wasn't a suprise that she wasn't comming back, but that doesn't really matter. Good chapter overall, can't wait for the next
Aww, my heart hurts for the guys :( Lexi isn't being fair to them at all. She could totally find something in Weybridge, love should be more important than anything else.
Been looking for a good Josh story for the longest time and I'm glad to have found this now. Looking forward to seeing where you're taking this and you have a really nice writing style, everything flows well and the narrative makes sense. Looking forward to reading more.
I guess I could honestly say, I've fallen in love with this story. I love how your writing makes it seem as if everything flows smoothly and awkwardly bumpy in a satisfying way. I also like how everything isn't rainbows and unicorns, it seems very much real, the way things would actually happen. Keep it up! :)