Fanfics are not what I would go for at all, but this was pretty interesting. It's very realistic, I love the way the voices whisper to Frank and convince him everyone is out to get him. That's what happens, so it's clear you've done your research into this. It's really creepy, well done =]
Sorry it took me a while to get back to you, by the way.
Excellent update. I think the characters are well written. Frank is so sad and lost. You portray him very well. Can't wait for the next chapter. Guess they are on the move again.
Just found this and I love it! Poor Frank. He is lucky Gerard saved him from the cops and then lucky that he saved him at the grave site. Can't wait for more.