Life on the Murder Scene - Comments

  • Miss Tiffany Blews

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    -reads ending and finishes the story- AHHH!!!
    July 5th, 2011 at 08:02pm
  • Beast In Repose

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    Gah, that was fucking amazing. I'm close to tears. Nooo! I don't want it to end, I don't want either of them to die!!! :(
    September 21st, 2010 at 03:08pm
  • totheark.

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    Wow. xD

    Fanfics are not what I would go for at all, but this was pretty interesting. It's very realistic, I love the way the voices whisper to Frank and convince him everyone is out to get him. That's what happens, so it's clear you've done your research into this. It's really creepy, well done =]

    Sorry it took me a while to get back to you, by the way.
    July 26th, 2010 at 09:36pm
  • Castiean

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    aw its over :( i like this story,it was really good
    i wish you would have continued it
    May 10th, 2010 at 10:04pm
  • Music_Freak_6661

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    Amazing! (:
    I'm sad it's over though. ):
    But very good over all.(:
    May 10th, 2010 at 08:48pm
  • Music_Freak_6661

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    Damn.
    Such a great story.(:
    I can't wait to read more.
    April 23rd, 2010 at 01:12pm
  • Music_Freak_6661

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    Holy shit.lol.
    That's intense but really great.(:
    Write more?
    April 19th, 2010 at 10:26pm
  • Lexington.

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    I dun like the voice in Franks head.. Its mean.
    April 16th, 2010 at 08:22pm
  • baysway

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    Excellent update. I think the characters are well written. Frank is so sad and lost. You portray him very well. Can't wait for the next chapter. Guess they are on the move again.
    April 12th, 2010 at 06:07am
  • The Darkest Daughter

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    i love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
    April 11th, 2010 at 11:29pm
  • Lexington.

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    They love each other <3 yay.
    April 11th, 2010 at 01:47am
  • Keep Running.

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    Nooooooo!!! no break, please??? I love this story a lot! continue writing!
    April 8th, 2010 at 04:06am
  • Music_Freak_6661

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    Noooooo!.
    Don't take a break!. lol.
    I love this story so much.
    It's so good.(:
    Keep writing more.(:
    April 6th, 2010 at 10:25pm
  • Castiean

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    no break please o.o i like this its interesting
    please update soon
    April 6th, 2010 at 10:24pm
  • spook

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    wow kinda creepy but I like it :)

    keep writing :D
    April 6th, 2010 at 10:16pm
  • Music_Freak_6661

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    Awww.
    Poor Frankie. ):
    I love Gerard. He is just so loving and sweet. It's so cute.
    Keep updating! (:
    April 2nd, 2010 at 12:02am
  • baysway

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    Loving this story. Frank is just adorable, but in a very sad way. I look forward to the next update.
    March 30th, 2010 at 02:29am
  • Music_Freak_6661

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    Ohhh.
    Cute.(:
    Loving this a lot.
    Can't wait to read more.(:
    March 29th, 2010 at 11:21pm
  • Music_Freak_6661

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    I just found this story and I'm glad I did.
    I love it.
    I wanna read more! (:
    Update soon?
    March 26th, 2010 at 09:45pm
  • baysway

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    Just found this and I love it! Poor Frank. He is lucky Gerard saved him from the cops and then lucky that he saved him at the grave site. Can't wait for more.
    March 22nd, 2010 at 10:13am