wow, thanks so much! I do have this written on another site. But I could totally keep posting it up here, I just didn't think anyone liked it enough to continue posting! But yes I'll post another chapter today.
Wow, you should really continue this. Your writing is amazing, and I'd love to read more. Please! If you don't want to post the rest here, could you at least give me a link to where it's already posted? I promise to create an account there, wherever it is, and leave comments and give you feedback!