I think that you should continue with this story, because I have to know what happens next, you can't just leave it at that, the would be just plain mean.
KEITH. What is this boy's side of the story? ): I swear to cupcakes, if this boy is fuckin' cheating on her, I'mma TEAR AT THAT HOE. Oh yes, it's time to bring out the ghetto.
good. i normally don't like adoption stories. but i like yours. Oh. you gots me crying. and smiling. :] I'm going to report you for that last "chapter"! BAHAHA jk. i do things in my stories that you aren't aloud, but i stopped, Like the link IN the stroy section.. yeah. i had to stop that. Thankfully noone reported me. ANYWAYS. hope you update soon. or get your computers back soon if you havn't already
Keith! I liked Keith. I'm not too hot about Zeth, though. :/