Dont Stop If I Fall - Comments

i lovesss this update! :)
and whats wrong with gee?

Gerard is very much indeed...
A vampire.
And a holy motherfucking sexy one too.

now theres more ppl commenting! yay now its not only meeee!

and is gee a vampire or something?

Hey I'm megan, I really don't read male prego storys that much BUT!! This story I JUST LOVE!!!!!....so please update soon!!! And check out some of my storys??

i love this! cant wait till the next update! whats up with gerard and blood is he a vampire or something?

im like the only one who comments O_o
tis too epic for me to be the only one who comments!
btw i loved the update!

twas epicness....again :)

Nice story, can't wait till the next chapter!

'twas epicness!
wow i missed a lot
haha but it was good!

i commented! now don't make mikey get hit by a bus now! plzzz

tis epic :)
-subscribes-

This looks like it's going to be good.
I just wanted to point out a handful of things, if you will...
The title of your story has to have correct capitalization, like this:
Don't Stop if I Fall or else you risk being reported.

Quote

!”My name’s Frank Iero” he said “Take a seat” I said pointing to the seat in front of Bianca.

That should be,
"My name's Frank Iero," he said.
"Take a seat," I said, pointing to the seat in front of Bianca.

Every time a new character speaks, you must remember to start a new paragraph, and speech must always have some sort of punctuation at the end. (:

A lot of things could get your story reported and possibly deleted here on Mibba, so it's a good thing to keep your grammar and spelling in check, because really, who likes having their story banned?

This looks like it's going to be good.
I just wanted to point out a handful of things, if you will...
The title of your story has to have correct capitalization, like this:
Don't Stop if I Fall or else you risk being reported.

Quote

!”My name’s Frank Iero” he said “Take a seat” I said pointing to the seat in front of Bianca.

That should be,
"My name's Frank Iero," he said.
"Take a seat," I said, pointing to the seat in front of Bianca.

Every time a new character speaks, you must remember to start a new paragraph, and speech must always have some sort of punctuation at the end. (:

A lot of things could get your story reported and possibly deleted here on Mibba, so it's a good thing to keep your grammar and spelling in check, because really, who likes having their story banned?