oh. my. god. well first of all, i absolutely love john tavares. like, marry him in a heartbeat. so i literally squealed when i saw the this was about him, because NOTHING out there is about him.
He winked at me as I backed out of the parking spot and drove away. -- i can't honestly admit that i almost burst out in tears when i read this. i'm not even kidding, somehow you got me emotionally attached to this story and i want to cry when they broke up, it was like i was breaking up with a boy...
that gif at the end made me swoon. i adore that you based the story off of that single moment. TOO CUTE.
This was so good!!!! I remember watching him walk up to the stage. When he did the wink i about fell off my bed. I like how you put the wink at the end so everyone could see it. Really good job on this. It was a lot of fun to read.
remember when the "wink" actually happened and we completely freaked out? that day was hilarious. <33
anyways, to the story. I absolutely loved and I can't believe you wrote over ten thousand words. that's impressive. I really liked the flashbacks and how you explained how important the wink was to both Parker and John. And the rings from the vending machine were too cute.
ps. loved the jab at Bettman, during the Draft Day part. it was perfect!
Holy shit you finished it. And I called it. 10 000 words, yes you went over but I got the over remember? You won if it was less than 10 000 haha. So what's my prize? Haha just kidding. For the most part, I read from where you ended sending me last night so it didn't take me that long to read and I read fast so it's all good. So don't mind me if I just comment on things from there on out eh?
Aw he didn't pick a fight about her not wearing her ring. I liked that part of the moment... the silent communication and how it just becomes apologies. No blowing up, no accusations. It's all good.
So I pretty much loved the whole 'whipped' thing. Good for a laugh. It's entertaining teasing people about them or other's being whipped haha.
Well isn't he just Mr. Perfect waiting for when she's ready and not pressuring her at all.
Stupid puck sluts. And that is all I'm going to say about that. Although a dude would think that's hot when his girl tells other girls to fuck off basically.
That sucks - WJCs high to a trade low. John is so mushy but it's cute. :]
Kinda sucks that she's jumping to the whole we have to break up because you can't be super awesome boyfriend anymore cause of hockey. Poor John.
Way to throw a dig at Bettman in haha.
Oh the wink. I thought it was cute how he just randomly shows up at her place to try and get her back the day of the draft ... well evening? Night... right it would be night. And his little speech so cute. Just full of cuteness is Mr. Tavares in this.
Excellent story! So long but so awesome. Hopefully this puts you back into your groove :)
I absolutely freaking loved it! I've been having a hard time on here lately (I just got called out in an author's note for being rude) so that made me smile. And I love the touch of the video at the end.....made me swoon! :)