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  • Tobias

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    I really like this story! update soon!
    April 12th, 2010 at 03:46am
  • adalynn.xo

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    Babies always add something good to a story :) I lovelovelove how you've been writing this
    March 27th, 2010 at 06:39am
  • LuckyNumber87

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    Awh a baby! I love babies!
    I'm too excited to be scared for them!
    Shaun's gonna be a great daddy!
    March 27th, 2010 at 06:28am
  • Tobias

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    Oooh, I like this.

    It wasn't trashy, you could tell things were starting to heat up though. :) For future reference, when in doubt about that sort of thing, just fade to black. :)
    March 22nd, 2010 at 01:57am
  • fireTree.

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    I like this story. It had a great story and the latest chapter left a spicy ending! ;) Update, asap, Im excited to see what happens next. :D
    March 21st, 2010 at 08:03pm
  • LuckyNumber87

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    Oooh steamy.
    Ha, I love this story.
    I really like how you made Shaun's character in this story.
    Can't wait for the next update.
    March 21st, 2010 at 07:03pm
  • LuckyNumber87

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    Awh! Goodnight kisses always make me grin like a foolio! And I'm very very excited to see what comes next!
    March 21st, 2010 at 06:07am
  • LuckyNumber87

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    Yeah, this is cute.
    I loved the first chapter, short and sweet and left me wanting more!
    And I like Rodney, she seems nice.
    Can't wait for chapter two!
    *subscribes*
    March 19th, 2010 at 02:15am
  • Lotus.Moon

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    Agreed, love her name :] I'm looking forward to see how this story goes.
    March 18th, 2010 at 02:33am
  • Tobias

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    She doesn't seem unlikable to me. Interesting start, excited to see where you take this. :)
    March 17th, 2010 at 03:47pm
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