I Liked it but to me it seemd like i was reading the whole thing and it was all pushed together and the text talk is annoying, and i get confused to who's talking, sorry :/ Like it though :)
You should definetly keep it, I like how it's original.
I really love this. I can't write fanfics, I just can't do it. I LOVED THIS SO MUCH THOUGH. I like Vee :P She's my favourite. Texting the person next to you is honestly the most fun thing. You're a really good writer and I want to read this again...now...bye.
you update alot! i dont think i could update that many times in one day...but i also write really long chapters...force of habbit..i dont like ashley...shes a bitch..really big bitch
How many times are they going to say 'OMG' or 'coz'? I'm only on the second chapter and I got tired of the 'text talk'. Sorry if I'm being rude but.... Gah!