Yes, Mr. Haner - Comments

Haha I have got to admit you are absolutely amazing at writing thses sex scenes! It's like I'm right there in Brian's room! lol oh if only

I'm glad I found this story! x)
Can't wait for another update.

Man, I just love how you write this story in a present tense kinda way, like you say "she cheers" instead of "she cheered". Its different, and I like to read different forms of writing, it gives my head a break. I especially like how they aren't like 'omg we shouldn't be doing this, it's illegal' they got right into like I wanted them to do, sometimes I get impatient and leave the story if the girl is still acting annoying by just not going for it already. I love this story! I can't wait to see if I won the role of one of the guys gf's (hopefully its Jimmy) , till then I'll just have to wait for the next chapters =).

awesome <3

First i'd like to say this story is HOT.
I love the idea & plot; it's amazing. kudos to you & your imagination!<3
:D
I can't wait for more.
*subscribes*

OMG, this story turns me on.
Update, please.
This is so awesome.

seems like an interesting story, more soon? lolz

Yay! Sexy time! I love it. So amazing. Haha!

Brian is such a tease, but I wouldn't love him any other way. Haha!

Can't wait for more! I am loving this story more and more!

Well I certainly shouldn't be laughing at 8 am so loudly but, I did. Loudly. Repeatedly. And I blame your amazing story.

I loved it! All I did was crack up because you did the character perfectly! Favorite lines?

He loves it when I wanna have sex randomly. He's got such a big cock that he's whipping it out whenever, wherever. He doesn't care. He's got nothing to be ashamed about. Neither do I.

Laughed so hard and thought it was so perfect. Love her and Samantha with the yelling! He was seriously just laughing! Wow, great chapter. More please!

i just loved how she cursed brian out. really, i can't wait for the next update.

i absolutely loved the update =D

Damn...That was amazing xD
Please update soon? *puppy eyes*

This story is AH-MAZING!
Update soon please?
I wanna try out for a role!
:)

YAY! It's finally letting me comment! Haha!

I absolutely adore this story! It makes me happy. I love the concept too. True, it's been done a few times, I love yours by far the most. You are one of my favorite authors! Keep it up! Can't wait for more!

Haha, everyone has a sex fantasy with him xD

Woo! that was beautiful! I thought it was gonna be like FedEx :D

in the words of a very close friend. Dude dude dude dude dude dude (and repeted about a million more times) I believe that this utterly disturbed me and yet its so amazingly amuzing. I have a quick question. How old is sam? just wonderin.

...fucking epic.

There are too many things to talk about, except I kind of need to take a cold shower, so please excuse the disjointed thoughts...Too much information? Yeah, probably. Oh well. We all know why we love this story lol.

It's interesting how you keep having the characters flip-flop; it's almost bi-polar. It makes for a really intriguing plot, since -- as Jimmy so eloquently put it -- it really is like a love-hate thing. Attention grabbing for sure, since it's rather unpredictable. The last chapter had my head whirling actually. I had to head back and reread some parts in order to keep everything straight!

On a side note of the last chapter...Samantha is perfectly comfortable meeting four grown men, who are friends with her teacher she wants to...render comatose (hahaha), in just huder undies and Brian's shirt? And NO ONE MENTIONS IT?! SERIOUSLY?! I'm just pointing that out. You would have thought Zacky would have at least made SOME comment, because that's pretty much unbelievable. Dream come true or something...

I do enjoy your narration. Having it in third person is rather useful, since you get to reveal both Brian and Sam's thoughts and perceptions on the situation without losing the flow of the story. The only thing I would suggest is to watch your dialogue punctuation and the like. Just me being nit-picky; sorry. Sometimes you just have incorrect capitalization and all. Nothing major though.

Alright, I'll come out and say it: I'm a pervert. And I'm really not happy the sex scene was not an actual sex scene. Just saying. Sam's a tease? You're definitely a tease! What is that, huh? You can't just leave your readers hanging like that! By the way, "girl boner"? LOVED IT. That honestly cracked me up. Never heard it phrased that way, but I really like it. I may even use it...if you don't mind, that is. Although
“I, um, I secretly, well kind of, like it when you, um, moan.” She grins sheepishly.

He brings her to her full height and has her lean against the counter. His boner travels between her thighs. The head slides around her opening and she breathes out a strangled, “F-fuck”

He chuckles, his lips near her ear and whispers huskily into it. “You mean like this: ‘Sam, fuck you’re such a fucking tease, baby’.”
How did we go from moaning to dirty talk? Not that I'm complaining, I'm just a little confused by that transition there.

FAVOURITE LINE
She’s willing to spend the rest of the day being on top of his body, having him thrust severe pleasure into her lower regions, but would he comply?
My question is, who the hell is going to say no?

Alright, I've rambled on and on enough. I'll cut this short. But I'm very sad that Zacky got made fun of; breaks my heart. Makes me want to kiss it all better lol. You've got some pretty creative jokes in there though, so on top of the obvious sexiness of this story, I'm also looking forward to your puns and what you're going to do to progress the plot. You can't keep having them get interrupted; that's just unfair. Just because they're fictional characters doesn't mean they're not real! Oh wait...

Aw Jimmy is such a good friend, looking out for his friend's feelings like that. Such a sweetie. I gotta admit I blushed at the thought of Syn taking care of his wood like that....it was a nice thought though, haha.

can't wait for more