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  • theavalanche

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    There isn't a lot I can say about this story. It is short, simple, and sweet and it was executed wonderfully. Maybe you could try writing another version with some dialogue, and maybe a scene from the narrator's life?

    Otherwise, it was wonderful. :)
    April 7th, 2010 at 12:40am
  • florence

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    I like it. =)
    Simple, but yet holds a lot of common meaning.
    I think the ending was my favorite part.
    April 4th, 2010 at 11:32pm
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