Just To Be With You - Comments

awesome job Benna. lovin' it. eeee!

yayyy i love this story already and its only the first chapter : ) keep up the great work : )

YES A SEQUEL!!!!! I love this story!!!

Woo Hooo First Comment.

At the end of the night, when I crawl into bed next to her I feel like the luckiest man alive, no matter what has happened that day or that week, it all melts away when I’m lying next to her. She’s perfection to me; there honestly isn’t anything I would even consider changing about her. My fiancée is simply the most incredible woman I have ever met. - - This is such an awwww moment. To have a man feel this way about you is such an incredible thing.

Sarah finally lies back down on the bed but she doesn’t let go of me. Her back is facing me and I scoop her up and hold her tightly close to my body. “I love you,” I whisper and I feel her body relax, her breaths become shallow and I know she’s peacefully sleeping again. Me on the other hand, I can’t do anything but hold onto her, pretending that if I stay awake I’ll be able to protect her from herself. Poor Sarah - she must be going through hell. It's nice to see that Zach gets it though and does everything he can to take care of her.

I really love the set up for this story. I love that it's Zach's POV, and we see exactly how he feels about her. We also get to see how everything is seemingly normal during the day, when Sarah is able to block it all out. I know trouble is coming, it's inevitable, but I can't help but think any problem between them is going to break Zach's heart!

I'm looking forward to more even the drama, cuz that's what makes a great story. So don't make me wait to long please!!!!