Decorus Phasmatis - Comments

Oh i must have written ten instead of twenty...He is meant to be 39. Haha your thie first person to pick up on that! And people have edited it and everything! Thanks.

This story is awesome! I got a little confused though, in chapter 6, when you said Eric was thirty-nine. If he was nineteen when he died, and ten years dead would mean that he's twenty-nine....

Aw, sweet. :) You've FINALLY posted the next chapter and I kbow I'm impatient but I don't care lol. Eric and Riley are so sweet, ooh, will they kiss on his death day or something? 0.o
The only thing I'd say is copy and paste that chapter into word and then your grammatical and spelling mistakes will become clear. :P

Bloody hell Cassie, I couldn't be bothered to read all of it because of the amount of text but once I started I couldn't stop!!! It's absolutely amazing, I love the paragraphing and the grammar and the storyline as well as the description and everything. You p[aint the characters perfectly and everything. Are you sure you didn't copy this out of a famous author's book? Because it's that good and you need to write more NOW. And noooooooooooooooooooo, she needs to get together with Eric. :( Who I lurve btw.

I love this! It's so original too. More please. :)

*I see some future jealousy. =]

VERRRY good story!
I see some future jealousy in the future. =]
*subscribes*

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I lovedd it

haha it says when he dies further into the story i think... gee i cant remember!! but he died about 20 yrs ago i believe. you will soon find out who he is and his history and there is a romance but u'll have to keep reading to find out between who! i have already written quite a bit of this story but my friend is editing/ sneakily reading it before anyone does, before i post it!! I'm so glad you like it!!

LOLS that's just so weird he can appear to her he must've been dead a while to do that trick
speaking of which when did he die???
Is he an ancestor of her's???
Oh does she fall for him or another guy and then Eric tries to get him???
write more please!!!!!!!!!!!

please write more pleeeeeeeease!

Awee :]
I really like this,
it's different && i have to amitt i have a guilty pleasure
of ghost stories such as this.
Awesome Job =]

i likey write more please!!!!!!!