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  • NikkiFoxy8

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    Please update again soon!
    September 8th, 2013 at 07:56am
  • russian pirouette

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    Yay! I'm uber glad you updated :D Keep it up! Me gusta :D
    December 5th, 2011 at 03:54am
  • russian pirouette

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    I love the update! Can't wait for more chapters. I will force you to write if needed.
    September 11th, 2010 at 04:25pm
  • cobra9874

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    i like this but i agree with the above commenter
    August 20th, 2010 at 05:54am
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    Good job! (here are two tips: don't put ahhh!! or two exlamation points when you write. Say, 'she/he screamed loudly and then also if you make the selection between the paragraphs bigger, then it's easier to read. ;]) Please update soon!
    August 18th, 2010 at 02:37am
  • russian pirouette

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    i like the re-write :D
    KEEP ON WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    August 17th, 2010 at 04:26pm
  • amabie.

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    its weird to read about matt sanders being so violent coz hes like a big teddy bear but ive never read a story like this before and i'm officially hooked (:
    keep going!!! <3
    ive subscribed and will continue to comment (:
    August 17th, 2010 at 08:43am
  • zipzapzach

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    i really like this.
    July 31st, 2010 at 12:58am
  • amabie.

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    yay keep going (:
    June 30th, 2010 at 01:32am
  • Jack-o-Latern-!

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    Could you like, make the paragraphs a little smaller? Even with my glasses, it's hard to read.
    But I really like this.
    June 26th, 2010 at 04:44pm
  • Jack-o-Latern-!

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    I agree with MusicMadness, and being reported is horrible. All you need to do is re-read your work and stuff. Ask people to check it for you..that's what I do.
    I do really like this.
    June 8th, 2010 at 07:21pm
  • justhannah;

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    It's...better...
    you are making it way too short though. Try to explain why they are friends, or what her house looks like. DESCRIBE THINGS! Seriously, a reporter is going to report this story. <XP please message me...
    June 8th, 2010 at 07:09pm
  • russian pirouette

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    I'm still loving this!!! And congrats on graduating! We're now freshmeat!
    June 4th, 2010 at 04:57pm
  • justhannah;

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    I really like this idea, but you have a tonnnn of grammar mistakes. Just wanted to say that before a reporter got to you...
    I'll happily edit it for you! just message me.
    June 4th, 2010 at 06:51am
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    This is different, never expected Matt to be one to abuse.
    June 3rd, 2010 at 02:34am
  • russian pirouette

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    Of course I loved our motto and the mac and cheese refrence. haha. You know me too well. Keep updating
    June 2nd, 2010 at 12:27am
  • amabie.

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    awesome update (: i like how she has a kid, it could make this story SOOO interesting and i cant wait to see what happens next <3
    June 1st, 2010 at 12:41pm
  • Tati.the.Strange

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    haha. yea, this'll take a while since im basically rewriting what i have already written and i just got back from a field trip like an hour ago. haha. so i'll try to update whenever i can.

    \Iero-Vengeance/
    May 23rd, 2010 at 06:42am
  • amabie.

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    haha i kept checking to see if you had updated and you did! (: i love this story, its really different ohh and thanks for the little thank you :D
    May 22nd, 2010 at 11:22pm
  • russian pirouette

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    i love it!!! I told you that people were gonna like your story!!! :D
    May 21st, 2010 at 03:41am
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